The second impression of the unforgettable experience was climbing over the wall to “escape”. We spared no effort to make contributions to the program; as a consequence, all the participants succeeded in achieving the goal. Everything finished, we felt exhausted but delighted.

Next came the most satisfying moment. A picture of all members was taken to memorize this extracurricular activity. Awards such as “Prize for teamwork” and “Prize for courage” were sent to those who stood out.

Please allow me to express my sincere appreciation to this extracurricular activity, for not only did we win trust of others, but also build up courage as well as improve sense of cooperation.

2012海淀一模开放作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

2011年海淀区一模考试情景作文试卷分析

此次海淀一模开放作文依然考察学生读图能力、分析问题和解决问题的能力。难度中等偏上，考生在不偏离立意的基础上进行写作，展开分析和论证，都能得到比较满意的分数。

首先，一定要对图画进行完整的描述，切勿落下图中的重要细节。从图中我们可以得出此题的立意为不要好高骛远，目标要实际。有些考生得出我们不要坚持错误的做事方法，这一立意虽然没有偏离题意，但是不够具体细微。因此，在立意过程中尽量要贴近题意，领会出题者的意图。

其次，在论证方面要由图中现象谈到生活中的现象，即联系实际。在结尾时，最好加上一些可操作的建议和意见，以使文章结构完整，达到发人深省的作用。

从语言方面，考生应在平时多积累常用句型，丰富文章内容；亦可从历年真题和模拟题中吸取有益的句式，加以学习和运用。

高分范文

The cartoon portrays a vivid picture in which there is a boy, a boat, an empty net, and a school of fish. To be more specific, the major character, using a telescope, is struggling to search for some fish with great effort, neglecting the ones swimming around him. Ironically, his efforts do not pay off simply because of his wrong aim and attitude.

What the story tries to convey is that we high school students should not set a goal out of our reach, ignoring the attainable and accomplishable goal. The boy would harvest more with less hardship only if he abandoned the distant goal and turned back to focus on the fish around the boat. Such phenomenon seems fairly common in our daily life. Sometimes, we teenagers tend to stick to a target which is beyond our grasp when faced with problems, which will surely lead us to a wrong way and finally in failure.

In conclusion, it is highly recommended that practical aim be set in our life. Only when we realize the utter importance of it can we lead a successful life.

（解析：陶然、李鹏、李冉、王铭、曹建立、滕霏等北京新东方优能中学教育主力教师）