第二段：另一方观点

①观点对比之间的过渡句

Just as an old Arab proverb says, “Every coin has its two sides”.

Just as an old Arab proverb says, “Every sword has its two edges.”

② 提出另一方观点：On the contrary, others are under the impression that…

③ 分论点：There are some reasons behind this attitude.

For one thing…

For another…

第三段： 你认为…

★表明立场

① From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the former opinion rather than the latter one.

★得出结论

② From what has been discussed above, we may naturally arrive at the conclusion that…

★喊口号

③Generally speaking, it is high time that we placed great emphasis on this issue. That is to say, further attention is to be paid to this issue.

★谈措施

④Onlythrough effective actions that has been takencan we prevent this trend.

问题阐释：What caused this problem, and what solutions can solve this problem?

第一段：背景主题

第二段：分析原因

第三段：解决方案

第一段：背景主题(4句）

①In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts.

②Yet at the same time, many problems have arisen, a serious one of which is …

③This issue has drawn widespread attention.

④In this essay, I will analyze some possible causes of this phenomenon and then propose some solutions.

第二段：分析原因（4句）

①It is obvious that the causes of this issue are diverse.

②In the first place, … is the root cause of this crisis.

③In the second place, … constitutes a major cause of this situation.

④Finally, … plays a pivotal role in this problem

第三段：解决方案(4句)

①Accordingly, the solution to this problem should be varied as well.

②To begin with, governments and relevant administrations should take effective measures and spare no effort to control this problem.

③What is more, it is necessary to raise people’s awareness of…

④Only when these practical measures are taken can this problem be dealt with step by step and gone with the wind.

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